Once he entered the shop, he went straight to the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more— all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman.

“You like these, true believer?”

Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face. “Y-yes ... Yes, they're awesome!” answered Tommy. “They're strong and fast and help other people a lot...” the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too.”

“Then become one!” said the old man.

“How?” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don't have any superpowers.”

“And why would you need them?” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy's face, he squatted(蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy's arms. “Did you know, that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband? She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person—” he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He's a firefighter; he's saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be.”

The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don't need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart.”

Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.

The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.

官方范文：

Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. Finally, he raised his head. “So I am supposed to ...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen. Tommy sighed heavily -he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please," he said.

The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily - it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.

一、情节真实：

情节一：老人的离开无声无息，Tommy的寻觅

“So I am supposed to ...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen.

这个场景有些学生觉得突兀，不可理解，老人怎么就突然消失了，但请还原自己的生活场景：你在超市里买东西，遇到一个人和你说两句结束了，然后他会等你继续回应吗？不会，他会转身就走了，本来就是买东西的，随便和你搭两句而已。换成我自己也这样，毕竟你我就是路人甲。

情节二：帮助流浪者的默默无声，对方简单的感谢回应

Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home.

很多学生写小男孩去给流浪汉时，写大量的对话。而实际上，在我们的现实生活中，我们基本就是把东西放在对方手中或碗中，然后就走了，根本就不说一句话，对方会点头表示感激，偶尔会说：谢谢。

二、情感真实：

情感一：依依不舍的纠结，下定决心的割爱

Tommy sighed heavily -he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please," he said.

我问学生，能不能写他看也不看漫威的玩具就买东西给老夫人？这样不是更加凸显人物的高大吗？学生说，不如这个真实。

这就对了！小孩子在把自己喜欢的玩具给别人，你要知道有多难？这才是儿童的本性啊。任何人在做出不利于自己的选择前，都要经过一番纠结的。

情感二：激动地跑，大口地呼吸，幸福地微笑

He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily - it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.

小男孩，给一个流浪的老夫人买了东西送给她后，会说很多话吗？老夫人会说很多感谢话吗？如果你的答案是肯定的，那只有一个可能：你真的很少做过这种善事。实际上，多是把东西放下，然后默默走开。具体到个例，转身后，会大步走开，因为这是他第一次做好事，反而很紧张，还有一些尴尬，于是加快脚步，到了一个无人的地方停下来，回想刚才的一幕，开心地笑了。毕竟，迈开了做好事地第一步。做好事是很不容易的，需要克服很多心理障碍的，尤其对于内向的人来说。

结尾语：一篇好作文胜过千言万语地指导，感谢在临考前还能遇到这样一篇好作文给学生和教师丰富的启发！

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